669. Harrod to J. E. Meade , 18 May 1937 [a]
I think your draft is excellent and of course I entirely agree with it. [1] My only criticism is that it is a little flat and lifeless. It is not, it seems to me, quite well designed to catch public attention. [2] I have therefore written a draft of suggested paragraphs to conclude. If you agree at all perhaps you could get the opinion of the others you are consulting whether it would be advisable to add them or something like them